I've removed the post about the opening chapter submitted to FtQ by "Lyn." I heard from the writer who said this:
"I DO mind another writer messing with my work and writing it his own way, out of the character’s voice. ESPECIALLY in public."
This was after I did a tiny bit of editing of a passage from later in the chapter to illustrate what I thought made a stronger opening using the writer's own (very well written) narrative.
In the polls, the original opening scored 80% No votes.
The alternative scored 77.78% Yes votes.
Sorry about that.
Ray