What NOT to Do When Beginning Your Novel

Chuck Sambuchino of Writer’s Digest had a recent post on Writer Unboxed titled What NOT to Do When Beginning Your Novel: Advice from Literary Agents.

I suggest you give it a read—I was gratified to find my preachments here at FtQ pretty much validated. Here are a few excerpts in hopes you'll go there and read ‘em all:

VOICE

“I know this may sound obvious, but too much ‘telling’ vs. ‘showing’ in the first chapter is a definite warning sign for me. The first chapter should present a compelling scene, not a road map for the rest of the book. The goal is to make the reader curious about your characters, fill their heads with questions that must be answered, not fill them in on exactly where, when, who and how.”
- Emily Sylvan Kim, Prospect Agency

PROLOGUES

“Prologues are usually a lazy way to give back-story chunks to the reader and can be handled with more finesse throughout the story. Damn the prologue, full speed ahead!”

- Laurie McLean, Foreword Literary

EXPOSITION/DESCRIPTION

 “The [adjective] [adjective] sun rose in the [adjective] [adjective] sky, shedding its [adjective] light across the [adjective] [adjective] [adjective] land.”
- Chip MacGregor, MacGregor Literary

CHARACTERS AND BACKSTORY

 “Many writers express the character’s backstory before they get to the plot. Good writers will go back and cut that stuff out and get right to the plot. The character’s backstory stays with them—it’s in their DNA.”
- Adam Chromy, Movable Type Management

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